Food essay follows the toefl rubric

  I might get a four because I think I have a pretty good hook, and I have  thesis that contains my main point of the essay and leads my whole essay. The body paragraphs are related to the thesis which are talking about the tradition of dumplings and how it relates to my family to support my thesis statement. However, I think there are few grammar mistakes in my essay that I should work on to improve my whole essay. All in all, I think I would get a four for the grade of my essay.