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Nina Yang

W&C III

Ms. Guarino

02/14/2015

My favorite twist stories

  We were writing about the twist story these past weeks in our writing class. The first twist story that I like is my own twist story. The thing that I like the best about my story is the plot of my story. It’s pretty shock about the plot because the ending of my story is quite unbelievable. The whole story of mine is immersing in a scary condition at first since my descriptions about my dream and the man in my dream gave readers a hint that the story is going to be really frightened. Because it was just a dream, I woke and glanced around in a dark room. Then, I describe the darkness in my room, and I saw something in the darkness in my room. The “man” I saw who was floating in my room looked like the same exact person as in my dream. After I described the appearance of the man in the darkness, I decided to see what the man looks like. The situation right now should be really nervous and horrify because the switch is near where the man was standing. Finally, I turned on the light, but saw my bathrobe and my hat were hanging in front of me. The ending of my story is a turning point of my story.

  The second twist story that I like is Amanda’s story. The thing that I like the best about her story is a lot of detailed descriptions in her story. Her story was similar to mine but with more descriptions of her insight. She described how scared she felt when all her roommates were sleeping while she saw the “face”. She uses a lot of figurative languages to describe her felling. She also wrote about her sweat in her hand. It’s detailed enough and showed how nervous she was at that time.

  My third favorite twist story is Sophia’s story. Her plot was different than mine but I think it’s pretty funny to read. She wrote about she went out with her father in a cold windy day. Then, she used a pretty lengthy paragraph to describe how cold she was at that time, but her father on the other hand wears like a polar bear. Her father began to ask her if she cold or not and does some actions that make her felt like he was going to take off his clothes and give it to her. She was imaging the bright image when her father takes off his clothes and put it on her shoulder. However, after all these imaginations about her father, he was actually zipping up his zip to make himself feeling warmer instead of taking care his daughter. At last, Sophia’s heart was broken because of her father’s reaction in this cold windy winter day.