Sunday, December 7, 2014

Revision #2

Somewhere safe
Nina Yang
W&CIII
11/08/2014
  Sometimes, I wander what will be like at the corner in my room, the little place behind my closet, or the cave under my desk. These are the places that people would never pay attention to and would never go to; these are the places that people forget the most and have the most dirt. To satiate my curiosity, I decided to explore one of these places in my room. Yesterday, I crawled under my desk where I had never been to. I sited there and observed for several minutes.
  For me, it seems like a big wood cave where safe to hide. It’s much darker than outside. To be honest, I feel relaxed and comfortable to stay down here. I’m right now sitting on the carpet I bought. It’s soft and furry, which is cozy to sit on it.  The first thing that caught my eyes is the surface of the cave because it’s grainy, and it’s not that smooth than my desk. I feel a little dizzy when I stare at the graininess for a long time. The coarse surface is pricking my hand when I’m touching it. Although it was kind of dark down here, I can still recognize the color of the surface is yellowish brown. Besides, I feel like I’m able to think faster down there because it’s quieter. In addition, I can sniff out the smell of the wood. I was not able to sniff the smell on my desk, but I can smell it inside here. In fact, the stubborn wood smell makes me feel a little upset since I could imagine all the trees that were used to make the desk is crying in front me. The aftertaste of the smell is like begging that: “Stop killing us.” It’s like using the last minute of its life to asking for the survival of itself and other trees.


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