Jennifer"welcome to the warmest room"-The sequence of the description is pretty orderly, and when she talks about the pictures on her wall, she also talks about the stories behind the pictures.
Sophia"Comparison of my bottles"-I really like the first part when she describe the straw in the bottle. That makes me wondering about what she is going to write about next.
Amanda"The notebook"-The story behind a normal notebook is really creative and makes me want a notebook like that.
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